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I'm standing here as the rain pours down,
You're standing there – I can't hear a sound.
But my heart can hear what the ears cannot;
My fingers can dance what the lips forgot.
The clock ticks by as the seasons pass,
But time stands still through the looking glass.
On the other side is a perfect world,
Where the diamond lies among the pearls.
I cannot reach from where I stand,
We're both in rain, but in different lands.
You're standing there – I can't hear a sound.
But my heart can hear what the ears cannot;
My fingers can dance what the lips forgot.
The clock ticks by as the seasons pass,
But time stands still through the looking glass.
On the other side is a perfect world,
Where the diamond lies among the pearls.
I cannot reach from where I stand,
We're both in rain, but in different lands.
Written: Friday, November 18th, 2011.
I've been trying to write poetry that's not so completely obvious as to what it's about. Been trying for over a month now, and couldn't seem to do it - I'm just the kind of person who wears her heart on her sleeve I guess xD
However, last night I was laying in my bed and... I just kind of, wrote this.
I still think it's unfortunately pretty obvious what it means/is about (though it does have a ton of hidden meanings) but... it's not flat out cheesy like most of my stuff haha.
Anyways, hope you all enjoy
I've been trying to write poetry that's not so completely obvious as to what it's about. Been trying for over a month now, and couldn't seem to do it - I'm just the kind of person who wears her heart on her sleeve I guess xD
However, last night I was laying in my bed and... I just kind of, wrote this.
I still think it's unfortunately pretty obvious what it means/is about (though it does have a ton of hidden meanings) but... it's not flat out cheesy like most of my stuff haha.
Anyways, hope you all enjoy
© 2011 - 2024 Pinkfirefly135
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Awwwwwwwwww X3
This is so sweet...yet not so "cheesy" as you say
I this one
This is so sweet...yet not so "cheesy" as you say
I
this one