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Such an ardent heart you are,
Hanging on with all you are,
Always certain that with time,
The heart you love will sing your rhyme.
You hope that love will change his mind,
But truth be told, you're left behind.
And now the only thing that's left's,
The residue of love once kept.
A hug to maybe warm the heart;
A kiss to beg a fresh restart,
But time's been lost and gone with snow,
Even Spring can't make stones grow.
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Written: Friday, April 6th, 2012.

I have just been feeling REALLY reminiscent lately, so I may as well use it to my advantage to get some poems and writings out of it xD.
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:iconlostdarknesslight:
wow it´s very beautiful!!!!!!!!!!! :meow:
nice poetry, you´re very talented!!!!!!!!! =D
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:iconcoginthecorpwheel:
I do not really have a comment or a critique, but your poem did inspire me to take a crack at my own “sudo-poetry,” which I still cannot believe I even attempted. I even made up a new word! Alas the creative spurt did not last, I tried to edit it this morning, and I could not think of any positive changes >.< (woot I can make scrunched face on here)

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:iconjewels4665:
I love this!
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:iconriversong0708:
Mood: Love ~RiverSong0708 Apr 6, 2012  Student Writer
I love the fluidity and tempo of this! I also really understood the topic you chose:heart: wonderful job;)
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:iconpinkfirefly135:
Aww, thank you =] It means a lot :hug:
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